I am fishing, watching as boats go by. The slight breeze is gently blowing, stirring the air. The sun is shining as my brother decide to go in and try to catch a muskie by hand. I laugh as the fish swim in circles around him, taunting him, but he can't get his hands on them. I imagine the laughing at him as he smiles, but doesn't give up. With his hard determination he is finally able to grasp one. After a moment of victory celebration he lets the fish go. We decide to walk home. Laughing and having a good time.
This was a cool short read. The descriptions were pretty good, and I liked how, in the story, your brother was finally able to catch one. Also, I liked how you said you could imagine the laughter of the fish as he tried to get one. Nice writing piece
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